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She´s getting ready for her depressive day .

This is the pic i like the best from the first roll i shoot in my life. Ever.
I got this Pentax K1000 and im just getting to know the way around it, so still need a lot of practice on the technique side.
I would like to hear what you think. What you like and especially what you dislike about this picture.

Colours and constrast changed a bit in PS.

=)

Scanned from 10 x 15 (cm2) copy
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Se prepara para su dia depresivo.
Es la foto que mas me gusto, del primer rollo que saque en mi vida.
Tengo una Pentax K1000 y recien comienzo a tomarle la mano, asi que por la parte tecnica necesito mucha practica.
Me gustaria saber que piensan. Que gusto y, sobretodo, que no gusto de la foto.

Los colores y contraste fueron retocados en PS.

=)

Escaneado de la copia de 10 x 15 (cm2)

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:iconemeraldfaye:
i don't like the glare at the top of her head. I think it distracts from her pose and from the picture.

I love the scrunticy of the model you used here. You've captured her very nicely and the color of this photo conveys the mood and scene very well. Its an amazing photo, you have quite a gift! Keep practicing =)

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:iconpeifon:
thx for honesty! really appreciate
:iconadrenn:
Coincido con el comment de Emerald~

Siga practicando peifon y no pierda las ganas.

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:iconpeifon:
El nuevo rollo parece que esta saliendo bastante mejor. Cuando lo revelee sera la verdad. Ademas ese planeo hacerle scaneo de negativo.

Paciencia y esfuerzo =)

Gracias por el apoyo :P
:icontocom8:
Go peifo Go! No les hagas caso, el glare arriba de la modelo es genial, tiene muy buena atmosfera. Yo hubiera jugado un poco mas con los colores. No soy muy amigo de los ocres. A ver que sigue. Un abrazo.
:iconpeifon:
En la tanda que se esta viniendo estoy usando mas luz natural. Creo que va a salir mejor, ademas de tener colores un poco mas variados y llamativos.

veremo :O
gracias =)
:iconbehappydoll:
I like this picture overall, but I think maybe it would be better if it were off to one side, then it would be more interesting.

and yeah, the glare does distract from her.

I really like it though!
I like the contrast
:iconpeifon:
Its a little too centered, i agree. In the moment we took it, i´ve had 1 photo left on the roll (i thought i had 2,3 more) so we took this one, then i made some weird hairstyle and some more things and when i push the button... it wouldn´t do a thing...:XD:

Thanks for the comment!
:iconhippo-hand:
Great shot! :heart:

Me encanta su pelo. ;D

(I hope I spelled that right. I can speak spanish perfectly, but my writing SUCKS. xD)

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